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Offline Cofeman

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[Feedback Needed]anime style

on: June 30, 2020, 06:26:33 pm
Hi everyone, I started drawing in pixel art not so long ago. But I drew a girl bee in the anime style. I really want to hear the opinions of professionals.what else do I need to work on? All thanks
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Offline blop

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Re: [Feedback Needed]anime style

Reply #1 on: July 15, 2020, 05:29:10 pm
Cute design. I think the pose would be more natural if her feet weren't to the side as much, but more behind her. The sword also looks confusing in front of her wings, you might want to move it or shade it differently. Her other arm looks flat somehow. Besides that, you could smooth out some jagged edges, like on the wings. I'm not a pro though.