AuthorTopic: [Feedback Needed] Female Run Cycle  (Read 791 times)

Offline fskn

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Re: [Feedback Needed] Female Run Cycle

Reply #10 on: July 07, 2020, 06:05:10 pm
Looks pretty good!

Offline TheWatcher

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Re: [Feedback Needed] Female Run Cycle

Reply #11 on: July 08, 2020, 08:37:10 pm
I made some changes based on the comments. This is the updated version.

   

Is it better or worse? If you think anything needs to change, let me know! Thanks :)

I am in NO way an expert, I literally started pixel art yesterday (although I've been interest in it in like forever), but although I like the arm going through the hair, it looks like she's turning her upper body TOO much to the sides. Almost as if she's stretching from one side to the other. Maybe you can smooth that a little? (I have no idea how, sorry if that was not constructive)

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Re: [Feedback Needed] Female Run Cycle

Reply #12 on: July 09, 2020, 09:51:30 pm
I made some changes based on the comments. This is the updated version.

   

Is it better or worse? If you think anything needs to change, let me know! Thanks :)

Nice  ;D