the win ship.

[bengo]

Okay, I should put this in my sig since it happens so much, don't use my colors, it won't help you improve.

[halu]

I know
But they were so pretty
I'll redo it myself with new colors as soon as I edit it again, which'll be tomorrow.

[halu]

updated:


my own colors this time.

[bengo]

I'm not sure you're getting the idea of shiny or hue shifting/saturation for that matter. The whole piece just needs more contrast, there's a useless gray at the bottom on the border too, for some reason. The greens just aren't bright enough and they're just way too much of a shifted hue, try to make them a little more blue and alot brighter, one thing you also need is selout(Selective Outlining: http://derekyu.com/extras/pixel09.html). I find no reason to do another edit, so I'd suggest just looking at my last two.