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Offline Snovind

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[WIP] small house

on: August 22, 2007, 07:03:32 pm
Working on a pixel house   ;D






Please help me improve it

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« Last Edit: August 25, 2007, 11:53:02 am by Snovind »
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Offline Danik

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Re: [WIP] small house

Reply #1 on: August 23, 2007, 02:14:46 pm
You should establish a direction of light and shade the house to give it form.
A quick edit:



Also the pattern on the small roof is strange. The roof of small part in the front is bigger than the section on the ground, and the small part of the house is longer (in this | direction) than the big part, which makes the proportions funny.

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Another edit to fix the proportions.
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Re: [WIP] small house

Reply #2 on: August 25, 2007, 11:51:17 am
small update.








Looks better now?
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