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Re: Poppin Portrait

Reply #20 on: August 23, 2007, 07:56:37 am
haha i may splice these into one animation and/or add more

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Re: Poppin Portrait

Reply #21 on: August 23, 2007, 10:41:21 am
only real crit is that she has man-hands (brings to mind a classic Seinfeld episode...)
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Re: Poppin Portrait

Reply #22 on: August 23, 2007, 11:15:48 am
I can't really put my finger on it, but the face as a whole looked very disjointed. I think that it's the separation of the details; everything is so isolated from everything else and with such bold colors that they stand out violently, notably the cheeks (fade them a bit more?). Jad's edit is easily the best so far.

I do love the concept, however.
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Re: Poppin Portrait

Reply #23 on: August 26, 2007, 04:18:56 pm
O: Improvement deluxe!

Even though what Rave says still is true, improvement has been done. Yay :]

I totally envy your skills in making totally cute and well-designed stuff. ; _; I want to EAT your skills.

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Re: Poppin Portrait

Reply #24 on: August 26, 2007, 09:33:34 pm
O: Improvement deluxe!

Even though what Rave says still is true, improvement has been done. Yay :]

I totally envy your skills in making totally cute and well-designed stuff. ; _; I want to EAT your skills.

Dizzy-drug is awesome :O

yeah Rave is right in that things kind of -stand out-, but i think that throuhgout this everyone has been trying to get me to make this look realistic in some way or another and i just wanted it to look cartoony haha ^^;. So the bright/bold cheeks etc are like that on purpose. I feel that changing them would detract even more from what i was going for to begin with LOL.

I'e uploaded a semi-final version to PJ :)

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LOL if my 'skills' were edible i wonder what food it would be o_o. Probably cookies.
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