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n4s animation

on: November 12, 2005, 05:26:01 pm
hi i made this awhile back and i fixed it up a bit.

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Re: n4s animation

Reply #1 on: November 12, 2005, 10:09:23 pm
try making the lines smoother, and more precise. For example, the middle line on the N is very crooked.

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Re: n4s animation

Reply #2 on: November 12, 2005, 10:46:55 pm
I think the crooked lines were made on purpose, correct?  If so, make the completely straight lines somewhat crooked.

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Re: n4s animation

Reply #3 on: November 13, 2005, 12:01:01 am
yeah i made the lines crooked because its like my handwriting

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Re: n4s animation

Reply #4 on: November 13, 2005, 03:53:13 pm
oh ok then, you should do what Darien said, make the straight lines a little crooked as well. It looks like it was an accident with some lines crooked, some lines straight.

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Re: n4s animation

Reply #5 on: November 13, 2005, 05:33:48 pm
This looks nice for what it needs to be.  However, there are a few things that could be improved.  Firstly, as others have mentioned, the lines that are straight now could be made a bit crooked to match the style of the rest.  And unless your handwriting is exactly precise, you might consider making a bit of space or overlap in the corner of the "N" and the intersection of the "4" where the separately drawn lines intersect.  A minor nitpick: the bottom of the "4" appears to draw itself; it appears while the pencil is moving away to draw the "S".  Also, since pencil lines are rarely actually black, you may want to consider making the lines a medium gray.  If you really feel like getting fancy, you can try to make the pencil change angles as it draws.
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