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Offline json

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girl

on: November 12, 2005, 06:19:50 am
shes ok whatcha think?

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Re: girl

Reply #1 on: November 12, 2005, 09:17:33 am
I think you have a lot of tallent, but I think your outlines look a little sloppy.

The shading looks complex in some areas, then very simple in others.  One suggestion might be not to use black for the entire outline.   ;D

For example, you can try using dark-blue around the dress.

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Re: girl

Reply #2 on: November 12, 2005, 12:10:13 pm
The sprite it self is good, but the outline is a little messy, and try to use different colors so instead of shade with a darker blue try to use a dark purple colour.

btw I dont think you should use Jpg it's ruin the whole picture so its quite hard to help...you can use, almost any artprogram to make them into Gif.

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Re: girl

Reply #3 on: November 12, 2005, 01:39:37 pm
good drawing. you might wanna bring her eyes a lil closer together and do something with that neckless, instead of leaving it black. oh and don't save it as jpeg. shes a pretty cool character.
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Re: girl

Reply #4 on: November 12, 2005, 08:12:22 pm
Hate to be the third person to say don't save as .jpg, but I remember other people complaining that photobucket automatically converts .BMPs to .JPG. Just thought I would mention that if you originally uploaded it as a .BMP and are wondering what happened.

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Re: girl

Reply #5 on: November 12, 2005, 10:07:57 pm
you could try saving it as a png then. Good pic so far.

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Re: girl

Reply #6 on: November 13, 2005, 05:22:30 pm
I think you have a lot of tallent, but I think your outlines look a little sloppy.

The shading looks complex in some areas, then very simple in others.  One suggestion might be not to use black for the entire outline.   ;D

For example, you can try using dark-blue around the dress.


thanks a lot, maybe ill try a lil aa

regarding jpeg as an artists i know bitmap is better-and thats what i saved it in, however ...PHOTOBUXKET aka photo-crush-it converted it

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Re: girl

Reply #7 on: November 13, 2005, 05:33:35 pm
what is aa anyway? never knew what that was... whats it stand for?

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Re: girl

Reply #8 on: November 13, 2005, 05:39:03 pm
regarding jpeg as an artists i know bitmap is better-and thats what i saved it in, however ...PHOTOBUXKET aka photo-crush-it converted it

No no no no.... you don't save as Bitmap .bmp. You should save as .gif or .png. That way I don't think photobucket will convert it. Photobucket only converts bmps to jpgs I think.

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Re: girl

Reply #9 on: November 14, 2005, 12:21:10 am
what is aa anyway? never knew what that was... whats it stand for?
Anti Aliasing (sp?) A technique to make rough edges look tasty and smooth.

Bitmaps are far too large for net use (from what I understand) .gif is good, but I use .png.

BTW, what program did you use to make this? The "wrinkles" look auto AA'd.
Also, I dunno if this is a side effect of the unfortunate conversion, but the lines look a bit messy. A good start, from what I can see, but a little cleanin' up could do it some good. Keep at it.

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Re: girl

Reply #10 on: November 14, 2005, 12:31:49 am
oh i dont like aa then...just cause ive never spent any time checking it out probably. I know what it does, but i didnt really like it cause when it filled things it made them look messy IMO.