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Offline Alevice

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Re: [WIP] Funky Banana.

Reply #10 on: August 10, 2007, 08:16:05 pm
The bananas I eat are much smoother than those rotten bananas by bengoshia and Eyecraft, really. That is not to say you don't need to fix your shading, because you really need. I don't have the time to do an edit for now, thouygh.

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Re: [WIP] Funky Banana.

Reply #11 on: August 10, 2007, 09:46:41 pm


Added two more shading layers. Now all that's left to do is add brown spots, perhaps?
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Re: [WIP] Funky Banana.

Reply #12 on: August 10, 2007, 10:47:21 pm
I think you still need to refine the lineart. The shape is off, banana's usually start off skinny, then thick, then skinny again. Also, the middle shade does nothing for it, and you need to define the 'segments' of the banana. They're not smooth all the way around.
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Re: [WIP] Funky Banana.

Reply #13 on: August 12, 2007, 03:45:12 am
Not to say much, but I think I'm improving drastically from what I was. I changed to This:

From this:
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Re: [WIP] Funky Banana.

Reply #14 on: August 12, 2007, 04:35:38 pm
Everyone who reads this thread can see where you started, and where you are currently at.  They can also see that you are ignoring sound advice in favor of an ego-boosting junk post.  Please stick to developing your art skills!  Any more fluff and you'll get a strike.