AuthorTopic: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]  (Read 8835 times)

Offline 8bitty

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #10 on: August 12, 2007, 12:23:43 pm
keep him breathing

fix those shoes! he needs some hip footwear to keep in character!

re-work the hands.. they need to be thinner, but keep the tips.

as for the animation, at both times before and after he puts his hood up his arms are motionless.. makes it look all too stiff.. so add some slight swaying alongside the breathing?



but the sprite is top notch, lovin' the sticky fingers pickpocket concept..  :y:

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #11 on: August 14, 2007, 10:55:58 pm
I took out the breathing because I was focusing on the hoodie pullup animation, and the breathing hasn't changed any yet. The tag in the title ([Heavy WIP], that is) is still in full enactment.

Rydin: Does this fix the pants? And damn those shoes, feet have always been my foe.

8bitty: Okay.

Does this help?

It would be really hard to make the fingers any thinner, because then they'd be just 1px, and Sean Frog ain't got no dainty hands, you know? And if I conversely enbiggen the tips...well that would look assly lame. So...any suggestions?

Will do.


I haven't changed anything of the animation yet. But does this help the shoes and pants any?

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #12 on: August 14, 2007, 11:53:29 pm
Good evening! Looks really awesome, well done! :y::)
The shoes, in my own opinion, looks abit like clownshoes. Maybe something more sneaker like would work?
Quick, and dirty, edit:

Although, black shoes might not match with the rest of his clothes, but just a thought. :P

edit: Xion, my bad, having some problems with ssl-cert on the server. Uploading to a public imagehost.
« Last Edit: August 15, 2007, 12:42:19 am by sweetfish »

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #13 on: August 15, 2007, 12:33:34 am
I'm not sure what host you're using, sweetfish, but I keep getting a popup that says something about a certificate, and your image isn't showing for me. ???

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #14 on: August 15, 2007, 12:41:18 am

(His edit, I just switched hosts for ya)

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #15 on: August 15, 2007, 02:25:33 am

Ah, okay, something like this, then? (based loosely on my own shoes)

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #16 on: August 15, 2007, 05:45:30 am
Pants and shoes look a thousand percent better  :y:.  Now get 'm animated again!!!!
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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #17 on: August 17, 2007, 02:33:35 am

Still without breath.
Any more crits?

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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #18 on: August 17, 2007, 10:52:08 am

Still without breath.
Any more crits?

Yep, add breath again  :P I really liked that effect, it just looked awesome, especially on such a cool character. The rest is fine I guess, cant find anything that doesnt look right.
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Re: Sean Frog [heavy WIP]

Reply #19 on: August 17, 2007, 11:45:30 am
Aren't you gunna have his arms swing a little?

Btw awesome character, pixelling and animation.  :y: