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Offline Sen

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Running animation

on: June 09, 2020, 10:46:16 pm
Hi everyone! Here's my try at animation. I'm not sure if that's clear but the character is supposed to run around with a tray screaming "hot hot hot" as if the tray was burning him. I was wondering how I could improve this piece. I spent some time trying to make the running more convincing but it still doesn't look good. Maybe the typography (and everything else) is changing too fast but I wanted to convey the feeling that he's in a big hurry. I wanted to place something on the tray but it looked bad and you couldn't tell what's that supposed to be so I removed that.

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Re: Running animation

Reply #1 on: June 11, 2020, 06:07:00 pm
I like it! only thing what is the red thing flapping around? his tongue? a scarf? if you want to plat to look hot, shouldn't his arm holding the plate be red? I assume his other arm is the black piece extended in front of him(and not his jaw). and the scarf/tongue should be some other color IMHO.

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...so his mouth is open(couldn't see the teeth in the browser). ...so where's his other arm then?
« Last Edit: June 15, 2020, 06:16:18 am by hANshOTtH3RD »