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Offline Ragnarok

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Old guy in love - colouring help?

on: July 31, 2007, 10:26:03 am


An old man with the two things he loves - his dog, and his TV.
I need help maintaining the style whilst colouring it.
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Oh, and it was heavily inspired by Souly.
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Re: Old guy in love - colouring help?

Reply #1 on: July 31, 2007, 10:47:32 am
Too be honest it is really small so there is not much you can really do with the shading. Maybe you could draw it a bit bigger then it will make it easier for you to add detail.
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Re: Old guy in love - colouring help?

Reply #2 on: August 01, 2007, 02:47:37 pm
The dog and TV don't read very well. That single pixel on the underside of the dog's torso kind of confuses things, its back looks too low, and its front leg looks too thin. The TV looks like a giant gas lantern or something, maybe make it more recognisable with bunny-ears-antennae, or more of a border to it with some little lights or something.