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Offline xavier_viiv

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need help in potrait-for game-

on: July 27, 2007, 08:04:05 am


something is missing here..maybe becoz my skill is still not enough...so i need help from everyone...
thx..

this should be a picture when a char talking in action game...in this case,he`s screamin...

thx again.
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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #1 on: July 27, 2007, 04:08:50 pm
If you change the inside of his mouth from a flesh color to more of an inside the mouth color, add some teeth...you'll be on the right path.

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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #2 on: July 27, 2007, 07:00:41 pm
Yeah, keep working on the mouth and he'll look great. One thing I noticed is that his right shoulder and arm are in the wrong position for him to be holding his fist like that, try to imagine his forearm and elbow, it would be a bit twisted here. Good work so far though!

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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #3 on: July 28, 2007, 05:32:05 am


made some change^^...

further c c needed...

thx!!
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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #4 on: July 30, 2007, 07:42:17 pm
i think his mouth is too big.

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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #5 on: July 31, 2007, 08:45:04 am


smallen the mouth...and fix some errors...^^

thx
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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #6 on: July 31, 2007, 10:17:59 am
Hand is too small. How about some darker shadows and add some higlights. Work out where your lightsource is coming from. His ears aren't the same size.
Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
http://www.artrenewal.org/articles/Philosophy/phi

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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #7 on: July 31, 2007, 03:55:51 pm
His left eye seems to be a little lazy, also try to make it so he is either under a light or above one for the shading, or from anywhere.  Lightsource really helps portraits.

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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #8 on: August 01, 2007, 02:40:40 am

fix the hand,ears, and eyes...--btw...i don`t know the meaning of `lazy eyes`...if you could explain..it would be helpful for me,claredeth...thx--
the colours is already too much..i don`t know about adding highlight or more shadow...
the lightsource is from top...but maybe someone could help me about the shading,if something seems to be wrong...

thx^^
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Re: need help in potrait-for game-

Reply #9 on: August 01, 2007, 03:33:27 am
when you draw - flip the image horizontally occasionally to make sure things look okay.

You should still have highlights. If you use the same colors for skin, hair and glove, you should have fewer colors.

You need a neck for your character. Maybe make the eyes bigger/darker.

messy edit:

Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
http://www.artrenewal.org/articles/Philosophy/phi