[WIP] Improvisation (i am beginner)

[lilwing]

starting to look better, his head still looks like a lightbulb. you should try putting another color in the face.

[Genadinio]

hmm another..... maybe you have skin colour colour palette

ok,ok i will remake but its a proplem only with colours???

[Zero]

The shading is also weird.

[Genadinio]

Is there beter?

[EyeCraft]

Howdy. Proportions are looking alright to me. The nose looks crooked, strange, however. The eyes also seem to be shaped perculiarly.

Don't worry too much about which colours you're using at this point, I reckon, just focus on the form.

http://www.anticz.com/drawing1.htm

Here's a tutorial that talks a bit about shading a form, check it out, hopefully you'll be able to see how the form in your piece is broken by its shading.