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Some cool Dude.

on: July 17, 2007, 04:26:52 pm
This is some cool dude. C+C

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Re: Some cool Dude.

Reply #1 on: July 17, 2007, 04:59:20 pm
it looks like he is slouching, his face needs more contrast, and either AA the corners on the top of his head or make them rounder.

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Re: Some cool Dude.

Reply #2 on: July 17, 2007, 05:11:39 pm
Added more contrast and tried to round his head more. Dont know how to fix the slouching.

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Re: Some cool Dude.

Reply #3 on: July 17, 2007, 05:50:43 pm
great improvement.

you can fix the slouching by moving his arms farther apart. do you notice how they're slightly overlapping his body? if you move them apar by about 3 pixels on both sides, and shorten his arms a bit he won't look like he's slouching.

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Re: Some cool Dude.

Reply #4 on: July 17, 2007, 10:48:28 pm
Added Hair. Good? Bad? C+C

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Re: Some cool Dude.

Reply #5 on: July 18, 2007, 03:38:08 pm
Your latest update makes it look like he's slouching so much that his head is coming out of his chest o_O  At 1x, the hair looks like a pair of goggles rather than hair.  Also, I recommend ditching the black outlines; you only have them internally, which is doubly weird.  If you use the colored outlines you've got elsewhere, it would look a bit cleaner.
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