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Face?

on: July 16, 2007, 10:34:49 pm
A Face. How does it look so far?

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Re: Face?

Reply #1 on: July 16, 2007, 10:57:46 pm
Needs contrast, at a quick glance I couldn't see anything but a single shape, bump up the contrast and lower the eyes, from what i think i see, they are about 2-3 pixels higher then they should be putting them on the forehead.  I'm not going to open up something to edit or examine it with right now but it also looks to need a light source defined so you can add depth.

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Re: Face?

Reply #2 on: July 16, 2007, 11:10:24 pm
Lowered eyes, made skin darker, and added more contrast.

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Re: Face?

Reply #3 on: July 16, 2007, 11:15:18 pm
Add alot more contrast, it's still hard to read.

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Re: Face?

Reply #4 on: July 16, 2007, 11:29:48 pm
SOMEthing close to this: (i hope you don't mind this shitty edit, but you seem to don't understand how much importance the contrast has....

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Re: Face?

Reply #5 on: July 17, 2007, 12:12:25 am
Hows this?

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Re: Face?

Reply #6 on: July 17, 2007, 02:41:55 am
There's a number of problems. The two biggest I found are the shading, and the palette. The palette has way too many colours, in some places you have 3 colours doing exactly the same job (the lines on the face, the outline, for instance). Theres not enough contrast by a long shot.

The shading is, well, nonsensical. Here's an edit;

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Re: Face?

Reply #7 on: July 17, 2007, 02:59:46 am
Hows this?
« Last Edit: July 17, 2007, 03:02:30 am by SWOT »

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Re: Face?

Reply #8 on: July 17, 2007, 03:07:01 am
Did you even look at Eyecraft's edit? It's more anatomically correct and really your new edit just took out alot of contrast. Look at how he did his colors, look at how the entire face isn't blocked by a border, look how it resembles a face more and look at how the shading is more realistic.

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Re: Face?

Reply #9 on: July 17, 2007, 03:15:49 am
I guess not. Yeah the anatomy of the face looks horrible. And its not just my shading i dont think the colors are good either.