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Offline Elrinth

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hmm, let's see if i can improve...

on: July 12, 2007, 10:56:05 pm
hello, here's my first in awhile...


can anyone give crit on what I've done wrong and so on?
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Re: hmm, let's see if i can improve...

Reply #1 on: July 13, 2007, 08:49:38 pm
The colors of the character don't contrast enough with the background and the moon could be less jagged.