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ronaldaam:







Previously I designed 128 original Black American character faces (Original Post).  Here, I tried to flesh out 14 of those characters by designing them further.  I placed them on a background I found online as a test, but I'll probably design a more simplistic background using the palette I have for the characters.

- ronaldaam 

ronaldaam:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaAkUEOSHqc

Above is a test animation (first part of first verse to the merchant song).  Comments, critiques, feedback appreciated.  Thanks.


- ronaldaam

ronaldaam:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mUeX2Ct2Zgs
[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mUeX2Ct2Zgs[/youtube]

I'm working on a more simplistic environment, which I believe matches my style better.  This one is rough, but I kinda like it because the carts almost look like they are pastel paintings.  It leaves a lot to the imagination, which I like.

The animation is not synced to the song here, and there is not audio, but I have expanded the moves of the merchant and added another supporting character to play the piccolo.

- ronaldaam

ronaldaam:

DONE!!

I've completed my first (short) animation in this project! 
Here is the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUQAPh3hxBc


If you have any ideas or feedback, constructive criticism or critiques, please share.  Thank you! 
This is the style I will be going with going forward.

- ronaldaam

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