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Offline sardine

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AgroGame - My first animated short film

on: May 02, 2020, 02:41:46 pm
Hello everyone! I am new here. I would like to show you the first animated short film I made with a friend. It was made to raise awareness about waste of water in Mediterranean. I also made all the 8-bit music and sound effects. You can watch it here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ngMGQrtm5U0


We tried to create a NES kind of vibe and to keep it as simple as possible. I can see some mistakes myself, like the rather short duration of the second try, or the plants' dance, which is not really visible on the dark background. But I am sure you are more experienced, so I would appreciate any feedback!

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Re: AgroGame - My first animated short film

Reply #1 on: May 07, 2020, 06:17:11 pm
i think you did a great job getting the nostalgic 8-bit game feeling.

the main problem i see with you art is that the character does not grab enough attention.

You can fix this by looking at how you did the heart containers, they really stand out from the background because of the black outline and very saturated red color.

i think giving you character some more saturated colours and an outline should get the viewer focused on him