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Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

on: July 04, 2007, 11:56:50 pm
This is a piece I've been working on for the weekly competition over at pixeljoint.com - Still a WIP obviously.
Let the shredding commence.

« Last Edit: July 04, 2007, 11:59:25 pm by Ben2theEdge »
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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #1 on: July 04, 2007, 11:59:56 pm
the leg on our left looks a bit blocky because of the shadowing and some anti-aliasing inside the limbs couldn't hurt. The blade on the chainsaw looks a bit sloppy and could be better defined. Otherwise, I'd say it's good going. Nice work.
« Last Edit: July 05, 2007, 12:03:45 am by Draco9898 »

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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #2 on: July 05, 2007, 01:25:54 am
she has really....manly....legs

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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #3 on: July 05, 2007, 03:24:35 am
purple hands doesn't seem to be proportionated, it looks like a cat-beast instead that think yo tried to give hands hehe....
i like the comsosition, but it was the only thing that smashed me....other thing...one more...he has a error on his right breast or am i blind?
yeah i like it very much!
hope you win, you made it for the he-she pixeljoint contest, haven't you?

edit: i was forgettin'...
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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #4 on: July 05, 2007, 03:51:19 am
Great design, layout, lightsources.
Don't worry about the legs, there is nothing manly about them.

If you'd like to improve on this image, work on the background.

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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #5 on: July 05, 2007, 04:05:41 am
I agree, I think the legs look fine. In fact the whole character looks pretty excellent to me, but the background feels empty.

By the way I just wanted to say that I love your work and I really look forward to playing a game by you! (whenever you get one finished that is)  ;)

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Re: Ash(ley) from Evil Dead?

Reply #6 on: July 05, 2007, 06:17:24 am
I think her left leg could use some definition, actually. At the moment, it's a bit bottle-shaped. Manly or not, the leg shouldn't be that straight. Other than that, I'd like to see how this progresses, because it's looking pretty awesome so far.

Hm... Maybe she could use a bigger chin? :lol: