[WIP] RPG-ish character

[TrevoriuS]

At some random forum I heard about this place and checked it out
And I've noticed there are few pixel-art communities with some quality going on in it
But this is one of 'em and I am sure you people think so too
I hope you can help me out (bet you can) because I am not really statisfied with this one.
Oh well, here you go:

http://trevorius.com/upload/uploads/character.PNG

[smiker]

i like it, but there is something i don't read well, that's the chest, it has the upper zone wrong or  am i blind? also, the line in his back looks like its wrong...you should check that.
one more note: the lightsource isnt very well defined:
*shoes: allright, i like that shoes, ls is well from this point, you should shade it as that, since i think that is the best shaded thing ...of course, i am talking of the front side, cause in the back side...lightsource is turning with your pic?

[TrevoriuS]

I need to fix the arms into top lighting, I think the rest already kind of has that no?
Next to that I have to accentuate foldings on the front side and indeed fix that back line.
I will edit this post later
I think this got better:

http://trevorius.com/upload/uploads/character_v2.PNG

[TrevoriuS]

Time for an update yesh!

http://trevorius.com/upload/uploads/hero%20stand.PNG