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Offline Kcilc

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Improvement?

on: November 05, 2005, 02:21:26 am
I was bored, so I decided to redo an OLD(Like, my first avatar at pixelation old) pixel art.
Old:
vs
New:

So just tell me what you think, and cnc is very welcome.

Edit:

Some new stuff





« Last Edit: November 10, 2005, 05:58:09 pm by Kcilc »

Offline Ari

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #1 on: November 06, 2005, 07:08:25 am
lol. no there is no improvment whatsoever.....





































..............of course! :D the new one is like 10x better man. Big improvement.
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Re: Improvement?

Reply #2 on: November 06, 2005, 02:09:51 pm
I think you have improved, but you color placement still looks a bit erratic. try making a sprite just a bit bigger and try shading it. cause right now, you sprite is too smal to tell.

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #3 on: November 06, 2005, 11:54:34 pm
The new one is much, much better.  It would probably help to try to make a bigger version, though.  It would be nice to see different colors for the head, hands, and accessories, too.
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Re: Improvement?

Reply #4 on: November 07, 2005, 06:34:05 pm
@Ari: Thanks. :)

@Kazuya Mochu: Ok, in the update I think I did what you meant, Thanks for the cnc.

@Sawtooth: Yeah I'll start working on a bigger sprite soon, and about the colors This is a ninja. :P

Ok, heres the update.



the stuff I changed:

Changed the colors
Added a sheath
made the arms, feet, and head smaller
Made the lightsource more obvious

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #5 on: November 08, 2005, 06:43:52 am
 Yeah, it's an improvement. The second one's anatomy is much better than first. The first reminds me of those old skool nes looking ones. Nice improvement man, keep it up. :D

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #6 on: November 08, 2005, 03:41:46 pm
You´ve really improved !...but naaw, i like the blue one better then the black/grey one, it got much more contrast. And yeah, i think its to small, try to make a bigger one ;) Good luck ! you can still improve

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #7 on: November 08, 2005, 10:13:54 pm
MUUUCH better. it looks more solid. the shadows make sence and help in the depth.
you improved alot!!! keep that level up!

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #8 on: November 09, 2005, 06:34:41 pm


Stuff:

Bigger!(Kinda)
Put the sword on his back
Added contrast(a little bit)

@Andy Tran: Thanks!

@Coner: Yes I can...

@Kazuya Mochu: Thanks! I hope the bigger one is at the same level.

Much more critique please.



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Re: Improvement?

Reply #9 on: November 09, 2005, 07:54:06 pm
Big one = definately an improvement.
I think it would look better brighter, maybe, 'cause now it looks like he's Sam Fisher hiding in the darkest corner of the darkest room or something. Also, it looks like his belt buckle could be moved < 1 px.

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #10 on: November 10, 2005, 05:57:40 pm
Update:


Stuff I changed:

Moved the belt buckle
Made him brighter

Some new stuff:







Edit:

Thanks
« Last Edit: November 11, 2005, 04:18:31 pm by Kcilc »

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Re: Improvement?

Reply #11 on: November 10, 2005, 08:15:50 pm
Yei! Its really cool now ! The brightness made the guy much more alive.
haha, i love that lizard guy, the killing animation ! muah  ;) very nice

goodie!