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[WIP] kami-sama's spaceship

on: June 28, 2007, 11:28:48 pm
i have been working on this ship, from dragon ball z, kami sama's spaceship.
i need coments and critics about the purple windows, has onyone how to make then more integrated with da ship?
altough, the near the whole pic has to be dithered (some parts had been dithered) and aplyed exocet's shading in some zones....what do you think?

 


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Re: [WIP] kami-sama's spaceship

Reply #1 on: June 28, 2007, 11:35:30 pm
The lightsource is very strange.
On the top-left spike it seems to be coming from behind.
On the other spike it seems to be coming from the left.
On the window it looks like it's coming from directly above (with something dark to the bottom-right)
If the lightsource is indeed in the top-left, the bottom-right spike would be in shadow.
The big window looks cool, as does the right window, but the left window's hilight is pillowshaded or some other wierd thing that makes it look wierd.

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Re: [WIP] kami-sama's spaceship

Reply #2 on: June 29, 2007, 12:04:09 am
oh right, well...thanks for the critics, truely!
i will repair it without pause...i really thank you for being so objective :)
well, thanks, again