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[WIP]Gotta finish...

on: June 27, 2007, 01:30:41 am
Okay, well this is my first attempt on a RPG sprite

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Okay, firstly I have no idea on how to shape the head, but i will work on that. I want it not the typical sprite more human like except the big hands.
need some help on making the colors work together effectivly. uh, Im not sure on how to make it walk (ps. dont have any animating program)
Ill also work on the sides as i have time, so yeah CC. as much as possible. please and thanks  :D
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Re: Failure right here.

Reply #1 on: June 27, 2007, 01:34:09 am
Needs more contrast, make the darker colors darker and the lighter colors lighter.

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Re: Failure right here.

Reply #2 on: June 27, 2007, 01:40:57 am
I know what contrast means, but when i add more constrast it turns out looking even worst.

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Re: Failure right here.

Reply #3 on: June 27, 2007, 02:07:37 am
The buttcheeks are very square.

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Re: Failure right here.

Reply #4 on: June 27, 2007, 02:40:55 am
lol, Ill fix that in the next update, really need some suggestions on how to do the head and some color suggestions.

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Re: [WIP]Failure right here.

Reply #5 on: June 27, 2007, 04:16:23 am
I think the newer colors are better.

The waist makes it look like a woman's, but the lack of a bossom says otherwise.

On the head, I think you're going in the right direction sans the ears.

Just try shading it, and we'll see then if it's looking ok.
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Re: [WIP]Failure right here.

Reply #6 on: June 28, 2007, 12:13:48 am
Okay, update.

the head seems small is it???
edited the colors, tried making it have smaller hips.
 

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Re: [WIP]Failure right here.

Reply #7 on: June 28, 2007, 03:17:19 am
The head looks fine. Nice progress :y:

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Re: [WIP]Failure right here.

Reply #8 on: June 28, 2007, 04:49:21 am
On the front view, where the hips attach to the legs, there seems to be a seam (haha, wordplay), like a doll would have.
I don't understand the reasoning behind the abdominal shading.

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Re: [WIP]Failure right here.

Reply #9 on: June 28, 2007, 09:01:43 pm
ah yeah i see what your talking about xion Ill fix all that next chance i get.