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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #10 on: October 22, 2005, 10:05:32 pm
Heres to the sky.

clouds and nightsky redone.


now i just gotta figure out how to do wood....
Go in the direction of the grain.
I like the improvement.

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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #11 on: October 23, 2005, 12:54:45 am
alright, well, heres another update.
I redid the floor/ropes/flag/pulley and then tried creating more contrast (darkened water, clouds,sky)

heres all of em, so you can compare:


newest being on far right.
anything else I should improve?
any comments would be greatly appreciated

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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #12 on: November 03, 2005, 01:08:57 pm
Last one looks very smooth. I can't say if it's done or not; that's really for you to decide, though I think it's been thoroughly revised! :)

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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #13 on: November 03, 2005, 10:11:26 pm
you have improved immensely, meestor flabor.  you seem to have forgotten the shadow gay-tor casts though...

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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #14 on: November 04, 2005, 06:23:52 am
thanks pep. worked hard for it to turn out nice. but its probably not done. i see my stuff as never being done, because im always getting better so i can always edit it later on.
but currently i feel quite pleased with it.
might do a few more minor tweaks here and there.

meestor leaf.
heh, good call. I wansnt even thinking about the shadow when i re coloured him.
thanks for pointing it out.
made an edit to fix it:


thanks again for da comments
« Last Edit: November 04, 2005, 06:29:15 am by flaber »

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Re: GAY-tor, yepyep AYE

Reply #15 on: November 04, 2005, 07:37:28 pm
Great improvement, especially on the wood. You were realy able to soften it a lot and to give more contrast between the gator and the bg. ;D

The only things I still find wrong are the clouds, they look like smoke  :-\