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[WIP] another building

on: June 10, 2007, 09:04:48 pm
This is my second attempt (the first was copying tutorial) to draw building. Show me my mistakes at this part of work (making form and coloring)


sorry my poor english :)
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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 09:19:53 pm
Well right now it's lacking a lot of detail, so it's a bit boring. And replace the dark outline between the two sections for a lighter color, they look separate as it is.

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #2 on: June 11, 2007, 08:51:04 am
Thanks for advice! :y:
small update
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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #3 on: June 11, 2007, 01:46:47 pm
great shape, everything is clean, but i would tone down the color a bit, this yellow is burning my eyes. Also, the thing on the window beside the door, whether it's a broken or there are soem bars / spider web thing, use a shade that is not so dark, a slightly lighter tone.
my way of the pixel? -> minimum effort, maximum quality 0_0

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #4 on: June 12, 2007, 08:37:02 pm
I decide to get away thing on window.
I dont have idea how to draw sign "no smoking", i draw only red circle, but cigarette.. i cant draw it. can you help me?
the white rectangle is the place for advertisement

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #5 on: June 12, 2007, 10:25:27 pm
Looking better. But I think you should remove the orange thing and the no smoking sign. The roofs are too empty as well; there wouldn't be roof access on the building if there was nothing on the roof.

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #6 on: June 13, 2007, 05:49:51 pm

update. thanks for your advices  :y:

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #7 on: June 13, 2007, 06:13:14 pm
nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo) ;)

ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam? ::)

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #8 on: June 13, 2007, 06:50:48 pm
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nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo)
thanks. at least, i'm not finish, it's only begin  8) i planned to add some more details


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ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam?
no, i'm not he :D

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Re: [WIP] another building

Reply #9 on: June 16, 2007, 06:28:28 pm
very nice i made  quick edit to it to show u some ideas




remove the windows and where the red is make like the building owners name and comapnay stuff i dunno lol just sounds good :P

extend path and road and maybe have path from side door

have a helipad on tall building

maybe some people and vehicles
?


any way good job