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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #30 on: June 19, 2007, 07:53:10 pm
i wanted to stay with my original concept, but i will try the color you suggested in the next edit
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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #31 on: June 19, 2007, 07:58:53 pm
I think the guns are too big; once again you have a weight problem there. There's no way that guy could hold those guns like that, especially since he's pretty skinny. Still much better than before though.

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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #32 on: June 19, 2007, 08:19:07 pm
i think that i just played too much japanese games, everything they make is overpowered......
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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #33 on: June 19, 2007, 08:30:00 pm
hey great progress - the lines on his headband, the way they fly out seems very arbitrary and hurts the compo a bit - otherwise, PROCEED

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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #34 on: June 22, 2007, 10:55:28 am
next edit, i plan to work on the gun some more

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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #35 on: June 22, 2007, 03:06:47 pm
Wow!
I glad for you - you not be afraid a full revamp - it's good the trait of character)))
Very good. But I think, if the Big Guns, than man must be a bit mighty in hand? Now is some comic )) But maybe it's a good.
Anyway this me like more, than first design.

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Re: this time a hand made character- need crits

Reply #36 on: June 22, 2007, 04:33:54 pm
omg, i have to change the shading a bit... i just noticed that his chest looks like woman's breasts.... thanks for commenting. i'm working on another char right now, keep a good look on this thread :y:
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