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Offline RosenCrantz

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[WIP] iso character

on: June 06, 2007, 08:25:32 pm
Hello all, I have started to make iso character sprites, i'll show you the progress  ;) :

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updates and critics ? pleeeaaase ^^
Please don't make too long sentences, i'm french  :crazy:
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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #1 on: June 06, 2007, 08:47:24 pm
The 2nd one's neck is out of proportions, to his head. And the legs are... well I don't know but something is wrong with em.

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #2 on: June 06, 2007, 08:48:38 pm
Hey man:

I think his right arm is too long compared to the other one, make his red/right arm longer and i would pull the shoulder a wee bit towards the torso.
Ill make an edit if you need me to.

I  like how you made those legs like petite/short-er stylized, i would dismiss the second version alltogether, the first is looking sexy  :y:.

-Krut

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #3 on: June 07, 2007, 09:55:44 am
The 2nd one's neck is out of proportions, to his head

it isn't his neck but his shirt ;)

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #4 on: June 07, 2007, 01:38:28 pm
Then his collar is huge.

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #5 on: June 07, 2007, 04:52:12 pm
Then his collar is huge.
completly   ;D

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #6 on: June 07, 2007, 05:39:57 pm
Well, I'm not sure that'll work, but I can't really say much until you actually make the character.

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #7 on: June 07, 2007, 06:02:30 pm
step 3 : (just a little apdate to have a better iso view)

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #8 on: June 07, 2007, 07:01:04 pm
you have set yourself isometric guides - follow them.  you've drawn a character that doesn't even pretend to follow the perspective of the tile.  It's an easy mistake to make on some things, like eyes or hands , but it doesn't look like you even considered it from the start.
A mistake is a mistake.
The same mistake twice is a bad habit.
The same mistake three or more times is a motif.

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Re: [WIP] iso character

Reply #9 on: June 07, 2007, 07:07:11 pm
Il me semble que vous etes français, d'apres le blog sur le developpement de votre jeu partisan tactic battle, alors si je permets de vous demander de me la refaire en français car j'ai un peu de mal avec l'anglais (jai que 14 ans alors vous pouvez comprendre mes difficultés), merci !