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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #40 on: June 09, 2007, 12:43:47 am
Hey man;

You have all the necessary tools to improve, we have given every last tip of possible advice; this reflects it alongside with a new colour pallette wich seemed to be your biggest concern.

The colours themselves are irrelevant, you could make the blob blue, purple or PINK like you wanted, the colours there, in addition to show you what hue shifting was, were showing you basically that they needed more contrast (that means in really basic terms, to pop out more), the inner colours, so the shading of the character is more noticeable, and the outline of the char itself so it stands out from the background.

I give you one final edit, with the colours i think you seemed to search for, in pure tones of pink, with practically no hue variation.



Value all the input that you have been given, keep at it, and dont give! we all start somewhere, so try and get those concepts we are telling you about; with practice, youll handle them in no time.

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #41 on: June 09, 2007, 12:46:22 am
yes now that is what ive bean searching for! oh yes thank you so much! :-*

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #42 on: June 09, 2007, 12:54:09 am
Also, just made this, just so you take in account that basically all of us told you the same thing.


The character needed more contrast; Check all the examples given, from all of them, yours are practically the only ones that blend with the background.


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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #43 on: June 09, 2007, 01:04:56 am
great now when i actually did get it right my comp freezes up and mspaint doesnt respond  GOT I HATE THIS LAPTOP

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #44 on: June 09, 2007, 01:18:11 am
well "I" think it looks a lot better becuase you can see the shape. i decided to make him not circular as you can see from the shading on his left side  :) i am rather pleased

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #45 on: June 09, 2007, 01:31:49 am
Hey, finally you got it!, its much better.

Your problem now, is that the tone you are using to antialias is too strong and similar to the outline colour, it should be a tad lighter, because right now its too similar to the outline colour.

Also use the lightest shade (not the base colour), to antialias alongside the colour i told you before, it might make the antialiasing more effective.

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #46 on: June 09, 2007, 02:25:03 am
Also use the lightest shade (not the base colour), to antialias alongside the colour i told you before, it might make the antialiasing more effective.

not sure about that part :/ dont quite understand you

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #47 on: June 09, 2007, 02:35:31 am
Bingo.

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #48 on: June 09, 2007, 02:40:10 am
I think the third pink (the one smack in the middle) should be used as anti-aliasing on the light side, instead of that darker one.

Nice to see some improvement.

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Re: [WIP]The blobs

Reply #49 on: June 09, 2007, 04:33:36 am
Xion sure i changed it doest look any different



i also started on the zombie