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Offline JWW

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Jake

on: June 12, 2007, 06:39:03 pm
I don't post here enough, so here I go.
my latest:
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Re: Jake

Reply #1 on: June 12, 2007, 08:32:27 pm
Looking good!
Only crit is that the dark part of him is a bit too dark. And his skateboard/weapon blends too much with his pants.

Very quick edit to show you what I meant.
You can use the highlights on the pants for highlighting darker parts like the knee protecor and the skateboard/weapon.

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Re: Jake

Reply #2 on: June 12, 2007, 09:41:27 pm
I have to disagree about it being too dark. I think it works well as it is, besides maybe some inefficient color usage.
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha ;)

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Re: Jake

Reply #3 on: June 13, 2007, 10:53:48 pm
hey JWW this rocks, I like it a lot.  Only thing that looks out of place is the lower legs, combination of shading and outline makes it look really blocky compared to the rest of the character.