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Offline Xenon02

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #10 on: February 02, 2020, 05:14:23 pm
It looks more live an oval shape. When I get home I'll try to do something about this water circle

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #11 on: February 23, 2020, 02:47:17 am
I don't know if this is what you mean by this circle.



I was trying to make an effect that she is staing on a plane surface (where there appear a water circle)

comparison from the previous one



What do you think fellas ?

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #12 on: February 23, 2020, 01:21:40 pm
I think you've made it worse, because now it looks like she's standing on an inline. We're seeing the character from the wrong, but the circles from above.

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #13 on: February 23, 2020, 04:24:41 pm
I think you've made it worse, because now it looks like she's standing on an inline. We're seeing the character from the wrong, but the circles from above.

I had a couple ideas.

1. Was to make some kind a part of a circle



But it was hard to make it look like (it is from above). I tried to make a bigger one to, but as I said before it looks like the water circle is watched from above.

2.

I tried to make this effect of a front vision (If you've watch Naruto you know this water circle on the surface when they are walking or standing)

It's pretty hard to make a right shape ...
What do you think about this one



PS. I know that the latest change was pretty off (I just thought that this might be the case so I tried this one as well).

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #14 on: February 23, 2020, 05:21:15 pm
Have you tried using your program's ellipse tool? Circles in perspective have surprisingly "sharp" sides. Your circles' sides are very rounded and that's why they look off, they look more like rectangles with rounded corners.

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #15 on: February 23, 2020, 05:48:32 pm
How about this one ?

« Last Edit: February 23, 2020, 05:50:53 pm by Xenon02 »

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #16 on: February 23, 2020, 09:15:41 pm
That looks a lot better!

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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #17 on: February 24, 2020, 09:51:43 am
I was also thinking about this shape.

I've seen similar shape in someones work.
What do you think about it guys.


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Re: Some criticism in this sprite required :D

Reply #18 on: February 24, 2020, 11:05:41 am


If you're going to do that, you could give it a little volume using shading. :)