Armoured ghoul + Fadatar

[DementedHero]

Well, there was a little contest at another forum, something like king of the ring, design and pixel a monster, and people vote who wins. Something like that.

So, here is my WIP:

It's supposed to be some dark ghoul, in big armour, kind of gears of war style. Some big useless battered plane-engine like shoulderpads for looks.


I also got a fadatar, and yes, I'm sorry, it is runescape based 



Critique and/or comments/edits are always welcome.

[Gil]

The first one is really hot, has a lot of potential. Perhaps drop some red in there (slightly orangey red) or yellow. Work a little on the shapes too. Circles need to be circles. Keep composition in mind too, the design needs some extra elements to work...

[Presley]

Glad I'm not competing against you yet*. The Ghoul is starting to look awesome, it needs more readability on the basic forms before you add more detail and speculars. More diversity in the palette couldn't hurt.

*It's Lovely from tif ;@

[Malor]

Not crazy about the fadatar, not jsut because it's runescape based, but because it's quality seems alot lower than what I have come to expect form you, almost as if it is rushed. The ghoul, is great, though.