To be honest, and don't take this personally draco, but that edit doesn't help at all. You just made it washed out and lost a lot of the volume/definition of the original.
Zee, i think you could do with a couple of buffer shades, especially on the shirt, but the current contrast works quite well. The npants are good, however i think the feet are a bit messed up. Draco's edit did a good job on the feet, so i'm sure you can look at that. I think you could add a highlight shade to the hair, perhaps even re-use one from the shirt logo, to add more volume.
Keep working on it!
