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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #20 on: June 21, 2007, 05:43:28 pm
Thanks Lee N!!!  ;D

Here is my spider robot animation:

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #21 on: June 21, 2007, 07:40:23 pm
Thanks Lee N!!!  ;D

Here is my spider robot animation:


Looks too slow and choppy. I think you should speed it up a bit.

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #22 on: June 21, 2007, 08:02:32 pm
what does choppy mean??  ??? i think i get it... huh...

i can speed it up whenever i want...  ;)

see

edit: painted version (not gif):
« Last Edit: June 21, 2007, 08:34:02 pm by cilveeks »

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #23 on: June 21, 2007, 08:43:46 pm
The further legs (the two in the back) are placed more widely than the two in the front. Shouldn't perspective dictate the opposite?

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #24 on: June 21, 2007, 09:23:04 pm
your right Helm...... but thats mean that i will need to recreate all 6 frames... its lot of work 'ya know?   :blind: and clock shows 0:28...  :(

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #25 on: June 21, 2007, 10:03:13 pm
Your is possesive. You're means you are, thus you'd want to use You're right Helm instead of "Your right Helm"
And, err, more on topic:
If you don't want to do the work right now, then take a break. But leaving in a mistake you're aware of is kind of dooming yourself.
Besides, you wouldn't need to redraw the ENTIRE frames, just redraw the back legs.
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #26 on: June 22, 2007, 02:17:28 pm
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You're right Helm instead of "Your right Helm"

errr.. that is very stupid mistake..  :yell:

anyway i colored all frames, here is the result:


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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #27 on: June 22, 2007, 02:57:55 pm
Nice progress.
I think the pair of manipulators (first left and back right - in the line of move) do a very little step - feeling like a limp. The pairs must do identica step for this construction.
And need some reflex on back side on manipulator.

Just think - You not try do put forward his manipulators (some rotate)? i mean bend in coupling, if I right talk - put in forward the toe of manipulators of course with that move (step will be more larger).
« Last Edit: June 22, 2007, 03:02:35 pm by mangust »

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #28 on: June 22, 2007, 03:15:19 pm
Also since this moves, make the chrome reflections move subtly as it goes. Will give it a bit more life. Check metal slug games for reference on this.

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Re: my dump (pirate)

Reply #29 on: June 22, 2007, 09:14:48 pm
i remade the animation....



but i think the back legs animation now look odd... damn   :yell: ... ok, will work on it tomorrow...  ::)