I think you've made it worse, because now it looks like she's standing on an inline. We're seeing the character from the wrong, but the circles from above.
I had a couple ideas.
1. Was to make some kind a part of a circle

But it was hard to make it look like (it is from above). I tried to make a bigger one to, but as I said before it looks like the water circle is watched from above.
2.
I tried to make this effect of a front vision (If you've watch Naruto you know this water circle on the surface when they are walking or standing)
It's pretty hard to make a right shape ...
What do you think about this one

PS. I know that the latest change was pretty off (I just thought that this might be the case so I tried this one as well).