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Offline InvaderLupus

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Profile practice

on: June 01, 2007, 02:25:51 am
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Less Colors (6 including transparency):

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I know I'm not that good at pixel art, but I want to improve, so if you guys have any crits for this piece, I'd be more than glad to hear them.
« Last Edit: June 01, 2007, 07:16:22 pm by InvaderLupus »

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Re: Profile view

Reply #1 on: June 01, 2007, 02:52:25 am
I actually rather like this. I made some minor edits, primarily to the facial proportions to make them more "realistic", though to be honest the original works quite well. Maybe some cleanup on the lock of hair at the front of his head would be good.



edit: Whoops, there seems to be a stray pixel off the corner of his mouth in my edit. Doh.
« Last Edit: June 01, 2007, 02:59:46 am by LoTekK »

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Re: Profile view

Reply #2 on: June 01, 2007, 03:00:50 am


Lowered his facial features, fixed up a few areas, and made some of the colors a tad more vibrant.

Thanks for the edit, LoTekK

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better, or worse?
« Last Edit: June 01, 2007, 03:26:39 am by InvaderLupus »