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[Pownatized]

Well I've decided to move along, I've started on the second guy. ( Oops, I'll fix those things on the main guy next)



I'm somewhat pleased with how I got the shadow to look realistic, but his right side needs work.

[Helm]

Both people, the heads are about double the size they should be for the bodies and implied anatomy. It's not so bad for the original character because I thought he was a kid. But the old man in the back really suffers from this. I think hoods and shadows and capes obscure a very fundamental anatomical knowledge deficiency.

[Pownatized]

Ah, I should've seen that... I suppose I should salvage some of the shading on the old man's robes, because I think the major problems are his shoulders and arms. If I make those bigger, I think it would solve the proportions issues. As for the younger guy, do you think widening his shoulders would help?

[Helm]

yes, somewhat. Also studying how to render lips, from references, will help.