Orc's dump

[AdamAtomic]

Heh, Orc, not sure how (probably my crazy typing) but you managed to do the exact inverse of what I was suggesting   I think this piece would benefit from removing the INTERIOR black lines first - though removing the exterior outlines would be a good step to take eventually anyways   keep at it!

[Snippa]

I think this piece would benefit from removing the INTERIOR black lines first - though removing the exterior outlines would be a good step to take eventually anyways   keep at it!

Adam has a point here, removing the black lines and replacing them with more realistic features would make this piece much better.
However, I do like the sorta comic book feel the black lines give it. So either way I like it.