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Silver:
Hello every one .
Iv finished my website , so now all what i got to do is pixeling and drawing .
today I Made this dragon and what to get some c+c on it please .


Take care

Benuel:
Heyhey,

Now, the texturing on this guys is looking great, top stuff.

It's just his shape that's bothering me a little, he's looking a little jagged, and overweight. From his neck, his chest just juts out, and it ain't lookin right.

I'm lovin the colours and the clouds are lookin pretty darn good too, just get that dragon on a diet ;)

Peace,
B

MadToaster:
I like the colors you picked and the texturing you did for the scales.  The main thing that bothers my eyes is that the dragon looks flat. Here's a link to a  book that teaches how to draw with forms to give things a more solid and round appearance.

http://www.saveloomis.org/fun/1.htm

Don't let the sillyness or how old the book is throw you off. He's sharing some really powerful stuff but trying to make it accessible. :)

Silver:
Lol It was really flat I wanted to do texter with out a shading and thats wrong
here is an update

CrematedPumpkin:
For some reason those colors remind me of stoven's colors on his dragon bahamut thing, but I havent look at his stuff for a long time though. I like the edit, much better. As people already said, he doesn't look very good linewise, but the shading is great.

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