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[CC][Feedback] Pixel Portrait of a Border Guard

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JayKnox:


First time posting here. The things I'm most uncertain about are the colors and the legibility of the character's pose, but I'll definitely take suggestions or pointers on anything else as well.

Thoughts?

MysteryMeat:
while i am loving the angle on this dude, it's a bit hard for me to parse anything below the neck on this fella. Something's up with the clarity there!

JayKnox:

--- Quote from: MysteryMeat on November 12, 2019, 10:11:22 pm ---while i am loving the angle on this dude, it's a bit hard for me to parse anything below the neck on this fella. Something's up with the clarity there!

--- End quote ---

Yeah, that's a good point. I should probably give him some better defined clothes.

Mistajaye:
Here's my input meow. I really like the style of this piece, Great job on your work. With that said~  I Simply just added a lil shading and dithering around the sword area to make it come alive. Or bring it out more and all dat jazz. ^_^

MysteryMeat:
Spoilerthis is some great feedback, but please don't rp on the board, that's kinda strange

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