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Offline Sallune

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Putting ourselves on the way...

on: July 22, 2005, 03:11:11 am

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Kryon

Hope you like em, suggestions and comments are very welcome!
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Re: Putting ourselves on the way...

Reply #1 on: July 22, 2005, 03:18:59 am
That's so sexy it isn't cool anymore. Do you mind if I drool on it for a while and not find any crits whatsoever?

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Re: Putting ourselves on the way...

Reply #2 on: July 22, 2005, 08:05:13 pm
The avatar came out pretty good. There are quite a few jaggies though. There are some seemingly harsh lines in the ear. Should there be any hair detail at the top of the head? It seems a little unfinished looking, but I could be totally wrong about that. :P

The Kryon avatar is interesting. I like the hair colors and shading. The sword has an irregular angle, which I understand makes it difficult to shade, but I would suggest at least giving that a try. At 1x it looks MOSTLY flawless. Great armor and belt details too! :)

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Re: Putting ourselves on the way...

Reply #3 on: July 22, 2005, 11:02:31 pm
Thanks for the comments ^_^

Well, I tried to put a "hole" that would show where the hair starts, but didn't like it. I actually don't know how to do it well. I'll try and upgrade this one later ^^

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Re: Putting ourselves on the way...

Reply #4 on: July 22, 2005, 11:11:53 pm
The hair doesn't need much. Just use a subtly darker color to create some texture and dark spots.