Stan's Dump Of Many Things Which Need Crits

[madartiststan]

Ok, got the complete version of the sprite up and done.

Tell me what you think:




What can I say, I was interested. Can't knock me for trying! Here:

[Sherman Gill]

Lightsource don't make sense.
First, it's looking a bit pillowshadey.
Theen, the highlights are on the edges of the hair, in a manner that defies the laws of... Umm... Light? While your method does provide some depth on the hair, with the lighsource, most of the hair should be lit up, not just the sides.

[madartiststan]

E: Editted up the rpg character some.

[fil_razorback]

Quick edit :


GO SIMPLER !

-You don't need that many shades. Only 2-3 per color are enough.
-Pick a damned light source ! Mine is on the left

[madartiststan]

Uh, wow. What a wonderful edit fil. I love how you did it!  I just really want mine to look more cartoony so I left the black outline in there and everything.