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Offline Bonus

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first attempt at a mockup :O

on: May 04, 2007, 10:28:49 pm


The whole plat and white thing wasnt originally the style, its just to give stuff a little shape as im terrible with colours. I really struggle to make good colours and its been holding me back for a long while.

i was hoping to make this more organic but meh, all help needed lol
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Re: first attempt at a mockup :O

Reply #1 on: May 04, 2007, 11:41:45 pm
The cloud being in front of the trees throws it off. A little more creativity on the tree trunks would be nice...
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Re: first attempt at a mockup :O

Reply #2 on: May 05, 2007, 01:09:48 am
Actually, I like the cloud being in front of the trees. Might not make much (any) sense, but it looks like something the playerwould be able to jump on.
I think the trees could use a bit more depth. Look like...four spheres smashed together rather than a clover, like they are now. I agree with gil about the trunks.
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Re: first attempt at a mockup :O

Reply #3 on: May 05, 2007, 02:42:02 am
I also agree about the trunks they don't really fit the style.. but the clouds seems fine to me.. obviously, it's not a realistic world..  :)
I don't know what are the other 3 stuffs.. ennemies or bushes.. if they are bush I would make the base more flat.. ennemies, they maybe need a bit more work.. but it may work animated ..
I'm not too sure about the hlaf rez hearts..
want to see more.. :)
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