[WIP] Turtle

[madartiststan]

I was working on a turtle between spare times along with my egg, the turtle however has been suffering, while I try to digest thoughts over the egg.  That's beside the point, I can't seem to figure getting a more shapely appearance to the different little things on the shell as well as the shading is terrible imo. Needs abusive C + C

[Snippa]

Add some contrast to the green parts....
The top part of the shell looks fine, though I feel it should be brown rather than green. You don't really have to do any more texture to it than what you already have.
The under side could use a bit of texturing as well.

For the contrast I would suggest adding another lighter green for the highlights.

Aside from that, it's looking great!

[Reldros]

from what i saw (mentioned by snippa) the bottom could use more texturing, and it looks like you didn't use many/all of the yellowish shades on it.

black outlines aren't good either; pardon me if you were planning to change that though.

as for the top texture, you could try something like this:

[Malor]

Reldros, that seems to just make the turtle lumpy, not really textured. I think Snippa is correct, the top of the shell is fine texture-wise, but the bottom could use texture.

[Reldros]

Reldros, that seems to just make the turtle lumpy, not really textured. I think Snippa is correct, the top of the shell is fine texture-wise, but the bottom could use texture.

eh, you're right. i hadn't looked at a picture of a real turtle first.
good luck on finishing this madartisan.