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Offline Grynz

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[WIP]Lost in Open-sea

on: May 03, 2007, 06:52:52 pm


Making this for PixelJoint Character Selection Challenge.

C+C and edits are welcome.

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Re: [WIP]Lost in Open-sea

Reply #1 on: May 03, 2007, 10:12:28 pm
This looks pretty neat! ;D, one thing I ntoiced, is the selout. It is kind of odd, and stands out a bit in some places, like the girl...thing's?...hair, I would just use a darker shade of green, rather than black. The same goes for her skin, I would jsut use a darker tone, thank black. All in all, the rest of the selout is alright. Nice job :), I am also assuming you are working on the water o.0
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Re: [WIP]Lost in Open-sea

Reply #2 on: May 04, 2007, 11:47:58 pm
Thanks Malor, I'll work on what you pointed out.



But I'm not sure on how to make the sea. Any sugestions?