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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #390 on: October 13, 2009, 05:57:36 pm
All good points, Takam. The final animation, and what you stated, are enough to alleviate my concerns atm. I'd say keep plugging away! I guess what I was seeing was exactly what was happening.

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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #391 on: October 13, 2009, 08:02:49 pm
I think my only concern is the actual swing of the sword is missing a huge gap, and no trial or such to fill it in. It just looks like the sword jumps from one side to the other.

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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #392 on: October 13, 2009, 08:21:33 pm
I think that with swooshes it will look alright. Takam is going for a quick response time between when the player presses the attack button, and when the attack will connect with an enemy. It's necessary to cut the actual attack into more exaggerated frames in order to achieve that. I think that currently the player would be connecting with the enemy after two frames of animation have played, which is pretty quick response time. The animation after the connection actually serves a double-purpose here. One, it creates a specific window in which the player should press the attack button again to attack. And two, it allows for the sword swoosh to residually disappear, which creates a sort of gradation when combined with the initial attack. And it's that gradation the swooshes provide, that make me think it's alright. And actually, would work better than, say adding more frames to the initial attack and just speeding up the frame rate to correct for timing.

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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #393 on: October 13, 2009, 09:37:22 pm
Thanks, I didn't want to sound too up myself, but I think combining the recovery following each swing as the build up for the next is a great solution.
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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #394 on: October 15, 2009, 12:05:13 am
While we're on the subject of animations...



Some of the frames are too sketchy, and everything but the idle was compromised for time. Overall I dig it, but any concerns I'm willing to listen to.  Although, I have to admit that the last few frames of the death animation have this flopping snake body that doesn't look convincing at all. I knew that it didn't, but I didn't have the desire to go back and rework the past 4+ frames to correct it.
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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #395 on: October 15, 2009, 09:01:26 am
Couldn't resist having a quick go at colouring some of Arachne's lovely lines.





Doppleganger: that's really sweet. I think the death anim part is great. The spinning out and in could do with an extra frame though I think.


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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #396 on: October 26, 2009, 08:54:23 am
Uh...well since you can put sketches in here..uh here are some of mine?



I suppose, if that's how we would do it..

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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #397 on: October 26, 2009, 03:17:49 pm
Some stuff for some friend's sigs on a forum:
Oh haha wow, Flyff right? (And same server as me! :3) I haven't seen any fanart for that game around for a long long time. Awesome stuff!
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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #398 on: November 16, 2009, 12:26:59 am
For this week's Pixeljoint contest. Arachne's lineart.



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Re: The Colored Line Art thread (Doodles also Allowed!)

Reply #399 on: November 22, 2009, 03:02:18 am


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