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[Feedback] [WIP] Character sprite for platformer game

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Dnilb:

What do you guy's think so far?
I included some alternate looks aswell, not sure which one I should settle on...

I know that hair strand sticking out is kinda too 'glued', should make it fall more probably.

@edit

(Its supposed to be a female)

MysteryMeat:
the waist feels really skinny and the shoulders are a bit pinched inwards. I'd see if you can fix that a bit.

Dnilb:

--- Quote from: MysteryMeat on October 31, 2019, 07:01:00 pm ---the waist feels really skinny and the shoulders are a bit pinched inwards. I'd see if you can fix that a bit.

--- End quote ---


Any better now?

MysteryMeat:
I like 2 more, but still hasn't fixed proportion weirdness. I think it may actually be that the arms are too short though so it's good you didn't take my words in there. hand should meet about mid-thigh.

Dnilb:
Another update:



Left one has hands 1 pixel longer while right one has them 2 pixels longer.

Made some design changes too, ball on hair is now different color for clarity, also added arm cloths. I think it makes hands look less awkward.

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