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Alien

on: April 27, 2007, 08:22:52 am


need some critique I think as I'm fairly happy with this so far but which palette would you guys would recommend, I'm leaning towards the first one at the moment but i want it to be aesthetically pleasing to everyone not just me. I think the leg might be a bit long before the knee are there any other anatomy problems, and should i bother fixing this or is it not too drastic? I sort of want slightly odd anatomy as it's not human but I'm not sure if something like that would impede movement.
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Re: Alien

Reply #1 on: April 27, 2007, 08:42:13 am
sorta reminded me a bit of super metroid... not sure why...
all of them, with the exception of the first, appear to look a bit metalic, was this what you were aiming for?
If not, I'd have to say the first one. If you were going for a metalic look on the otherhand, i'd say I like the blue ones.

The leg does look a bit odd, though I'm not the person to ask whether it would impede movement. I think alot of it has to do with your imagination and if you can animate it without it looking too awkward.

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Re: Alien

Reply #2 on: April 27, 2007, 09:02:42 am
Yeh i think my main problem with the other colours is they look too metallic. The reason it reminds you of metroid is probably due to the space pirates  :yell: completely unintentional likeness. Originally my creature wasn't going to have bladed arms like this but i changed my mind last minute.
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Re: Alien

Reply #3 on: April 27, 2007, 09:22:38 am
mm, after comparing...



not so much
Maybe it was the arms, I'm not sure.

(that took a bit of looking to find those images...)

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Re: Alien

Reply #4 on: April 27, 2007, 10:25:47 am
Me like more light blue color sheme.
Yes, it's some metallic but it's not horrible, in my opinion ))
About his body I am have some little changes:

Maybe more agressive pose? His arms is too straight for this pose and have a some swords (if I not wrong) - maybe do his metalic more? And legs maybe use something like a satyr. And his head more down and eyes more tiny and ominous. Than you will have a menacing creature )) Good luck!

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Re: Alien

Reply #5 on: April 28, 2007, 04:54:29 am
I took on some aspects of your edit, but tried not to deviate from my original character design to much. I really wanted this alien to look insect like, hence i didn't adopt the muscular look and decided on the greens as oppose to the heavy metallic look. The relaxed pose being the main thing, I adjusted the legs to be longer and portray more 'bounce' like your satyr like legs presented. I might adjust the head a bit later but not as drastically as yours has. Thanks everyone for their help so far.
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Re: Alien

Reply #6 on: April 29, 2007, 05:04:55 pm
New alien, he is meant to take a sort of Egyptian god look hence he looks a bit like Horus... with a Katana. This one is using the rather popular silver palette, So far each character uses 7 colours plus 1 for transparency, I'm not sure if I should add more to the palette or leave it and allow the single colours to distinguish characters more easily.
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Re: Alien

Reply #7 on: April 29, 2007, 05:13:38 pm
Maybe I'm just too tired, but I think on the new one you may want to work on the lighting on the head a bit, at first I wasn't sure what I was looking at until I zoomed in a bit.
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Re: Alien

Reply #8 on: April 29, 2007, 05:37:04 pm
ok quick edit on the head, i think it might of been a tad disjointed this is quite minor, but i think it might look better.
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Re: Alien

Reply #9 on: April 29, 2007, 05:48:05 pm
I may have just ruined it, but the head still looked pretty flat IMHO. so I took a crack at shading it. hope you don't mind me editing it.

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