hello everyone/little help

[Fernox]

hello !!! first at all: im from chile, south america, so my english SUCK. i will try to do my best 

well, i made a sprite of Gon, from the anime: Hunter X Hunter (the only anime that I really like, the rest suck XD(just kidding)



I like it. its not very well, but I like it, BUT i hate the face and hands. if someone can help me only with face and hands, i will be very thankfully (its good that word XD)

thanks

bye

[Terley]

you are making a common mistake with your shading, you have given your character depth, but no real light-source. all your shading is what we call 'pillowshaded' where as you shade an object from the center outwards. I'd suggest imagining there is a light on the top right of your canvas.

[mangust]

Yes, you have trouble with shading and with his body too, his look a strange...
If you paint just stand in this position - it's first my sketch, but if you fight - maybe second variant be useful - it's just quick sketchs for understanding position hand and foot(or this link http://www.fightersgeneration.com/characters/andy-a.html)

[Fernox]

helloooo !!!

I open my eyes, and I notice that the old version sucks, so I make a new version, using the idea of mangust about the position (I use the second position)

here's my new version (I use the OVA's clothes) :


I hope you like it, because I'm really happy with the result.


bye

PD:(I love this forum )

[Serendor]

honestly I like the first verision better.... mayby not in a anatmoy way but I think the first one is better.... Gon doesn't have that kind of muscles......

I think though you should make his shoulder bigger in the first verision...

well, I'm a noob, just my thoughts.... listen to Mangust anyway to learn the right proportions..

 

//Albin

[Adrian]

I couldn't help myself