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Offline Ar

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[Wip] Female anatomy [nudity] - New update 01.05

on: April 19, 2007, 11:05:28 pm


Hi!
Can you help me with this before coloring? :)
CC and edits are welcome.

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« Last Edit: May 01, 2007, 09:49:00 pm by Ar »
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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #1 on: April 19, 2007, 11:44:08 pm
I personally think her legs are too long, and by making them longer theres no figure.. heres an edit if you dont mind.



i dont know whether your working from reference or not but I would suggest giving her a bit more figure, slightly larger thighs, fuller breasts maybe.. I don't want to sound like a perverted guy or nofin, I just think it looks slightly too manly atm. especially in the face, as she seemingly has a large nose.. plus her forearms are huge.

in the last stage I tried to change these, I also had a feeling she was slightly off balance, moving her left left leg over a few pixels seems to give her more stability.

hope any of this helps.
I've not got anything interesting to type here..

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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #2 on: April 20, 2007, 12:22:35 am
Awesome. Thank you very much! :D
Her face is just temporary sketch, I will fix this part soon, while color work.
I go back to work. :)

Sorry for my grammar. :/
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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #3 on: April 20, 2007, 01:46:22 am
The ribs are seriously freaking me out, plus, if someone were so thin that the ribs would show like that, she'd have much thinner legs.

Just thought I'd say :3
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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #4 on: April 20, 2007, 02:11:50 am
Jad- True! :D I will change this in coloring.


Old -> New

Better?
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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #5 on: April 20, 2007, 11:10:32 am
Her breasts look very unnatural to me.

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The shoulders also seem a bit funky.

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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #6 on: April 20, 2007, 01:13:15 pm
Good, but not enough  :)
About balance talk Terley, you not to do this in you last edit (not entirely).
See on this edit for balance (red vertical line). From you she is fall.

Also see on:
hand - more thin, dainty.
breast - as tell you Luzeke. And up left side and a bit larger (nice woman - big bosom, but not milkmaid).
chest - smaller (man have big chest, not woman)
waist - higher
sacrum - higher
shank - bigger, too small (normal woman have long and beautiful legs)
calf - bigger and elegant, smaller toe and foot. And on you image foot stand on not gorizontal surface (slanting too much).

If you paint just for education, why not use pose more intresting for woman? Now she is ready to FIGHT (by frying pan and scoop)!
Or maybe paint more militant pose - about Amazon?
And forget nudity warning in name theme.
Please continue, you may this more better...

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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #7 on: April 21, 2007, 06:07:54 pm

may be that pose right?

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Re: Female anatomy [Wip]

Reply #8 on: April 22, 2007, 12:12:07 am
Thanks guys. I post next step tomorrow! :)

--update--



Huh... It is ok now?
« Last Edit: April 22, 2007, 09:43:32 pm by Ar »
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Re: [Wip] Female anatomy [nudity] - Update!

Reply #9 on: April 24, 2007, 12:38:00 pm
glad to see you working on another piece.

in comparison to the 1st approach, yep, the newer one looks better. however, I believe you can still ‘extract’ something more from the design as now she looks a little, let's say, stiff. look over the edits and just listen to what others say, :)
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