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Offline Orclaeder

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My first sprite attempt

on: April 17, 2007, 08:29:42 pm
I used a tutorial to make this .. its very small but its my first... its not just a copy of one and recolored i made it by myself point by point  ::)


Yes i know the line and the dots on the right shouldnt be there but well .. i couldnt be ..... to delete them .. because i will probly need them some other time
Im off to bed now.. gdnight ppl cya soon  ;D

Oh btw please tell me how to inprove it and what i did wrong(the head will be moving when im realy done but im just busy now with school and stuff)  :) (i will make bigger ones some day  :P)
« Last Edit: April 17, 2007, 08:31:30 pm by Orclaeder »
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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #1 on: April 18, 2007, 12:04:40 pm
That was like ripping off Tsugomo's tutorial.

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #2 on: April 18, 2007, 01:29:25 pm

This once is from tsugumo  :-\
You  changed the shirt color...

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #3 on: April 18, 2007, 03:33:41 pm
You  changed the shirt color...

thats a bit harsh, he did change the pants color too...

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #4 on: April 18, 2007, 03:43:49 pm
Didn't he say he used a tutorial to make this?  ::)

OK, now that you made this, there is not much you can gain from our critque on it, since it is pretty much a copy of Tsugumo's.  Now try making something original and post it here, you'll benefit more from a critique on that.

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #5 on: April 18, 2007, 03:54:36 pm
... its not just a copy of one and recolored i made it by myself point by point

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #6 on: April 18, 2007, 04:30:37 pm
What is your point, dragon?

I think it's clear Orclaeder is not trying to pull one over us, he just doesn't know where to start.  Like I said earlier, Orclaeder, you won't benefit much from copying things pixel by pixel, it's better to try your own original things.

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #7 on: April 18, 2007, 04:34:07 pm
He said he used the tutorial, and so now what I think you should do, Orclaeder, is edit your current sprite, perhaps a new hair style etc, and make it your own.

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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #8 on: April 18, 2007, 08:03:19 pm
I told you i didnt rip it, i used his tutorial, i didnt copy a thing.
I looked how he did it and i painted it and used different colors, this was my first time and this is how i learned a bit basics, also i wanted to change the hair but i came up with rubbish..seriously i couldnt make it better hair..dont say i ripped it .. i realy put some effort in it.. i seriously didnt copy anything  :'(
Darien is right, i wouldnt lie to you because you all know that tutorial .. but i dont know where toedit the hair at least..
Eck told me to make small edits .. thats what i tryed with the hair.. but i realy couldnt do it  :( Help with hair  :-[ ?

Oh btw ZxC.. my one has 3 frames .. you should have scrolled down more.. still ididnt copy  :y:
« Last Edit: April 18, 2007, 08:16:23 pm by Orclaeder »
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Re: My first sprite attempt

Reply #9 on: April 18, 2007, 08:52:36 pm
I ackowledged your first post saying you followed the tutorial, and I believe now what you should try to do, rather than dwell on your inexperience, is to give the edits another go.
If still unsuccessful, ask to help, by posting them here.

But, yeah, saying ripping was a little out of order.